Last week I read If I Pay Thee Not In Gold by Piers Anthony and Mercedes Lackey. It left a really bad taste in my mouth. To say that it thoroughly sucked would be a slight overstatement, but only slight. The thing is, I can see how many people, including the authors, might want to characterize this book as "feminist fantasy" -- protagonist a warrior woman in a matriarchal society -- but in fact it's almost anti-feminist, and depressingly so, especially in the ways it subtly (almost as if unknowingly) reinforces the same tired old gender stereotypes that make so much of fantasy almost unreadable.
That last sentence was terrible. Sorry. My point is, I think the authors thought they were writing a daringly feminist tale, when in fact they were really just barfing up the same old crap again and putting a little gender twist on it to make it look different. A typical fantasy novel in drag, you might say. The authors would do well to read something like
plaidder's epic Women on Fire, if they want to see how good feminist fantasy is done.
Furthermore, the authors obviously have fallen into that trap where they're so well-known and popular that their work doesn't actually have to submit to editing. The characterization and plotting in this book were awful. "Show, don't tell," remember?
Ugh. Anyway, so now I'm reading the latest Donald Westlake in hopes of cleansing my literary palate. So far so good.
Also, the week before last I read The Eye of Night by Pauline Alama. It was pretty interesting, a somewhat different sort of fantasy novel. Toward the end it sort of suffered from "not sure how to end the story" syndrome, with three or four different "endings" that aren't actually endings, but overall a good read.
That last sentence was terrible. Sorry. My point is, I think the authors thought they were writing a daringly feminist tale, when in fact they were really just barfing up the same old crap again and putting a little gender twist on it to make it look different. A typical fantasy novel in drag, you might say. The authors would do well to read something like
Furthermore, the authors obviously have fallen into that trap where they're so well-known and popular that their work doesn't actually have to submit to editing. The characterization and plotting in this book were awful. "Show, don't tell," remember?
Ugh. Anyway, so now I'm reading the latest Donald Westlake in hopes of cleansing my literary palate. So far so good.
Also, the week before last I read The Eye of Night by Pauline Alama. It was pretty interesting, a somewhat different sort of fantasy novel. Toward the end it sort of suffered from "not sure how to end the story" syndrome, with three or four different "endings" that aren't actually endings, but overall a good read.
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Date: 2004-07-06 12:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-06 12:51 pm (UTC)And yeah, I would love to elaborate at some point if I get the time. Stay tuned. :)
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Date: 2004-07-07 07:54 pm (UTC)I'm surprised you find any time at all to read, having a full-time job and a full-time kid. :)
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Date: 2004-07-09 06:45 am (UTC)the thing about this book...
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